Mystery Mansion Read Count : 129

Category : Stories

Sub Category : Thriller
It was a sunny saturday and me and my brother were playing football in the middle of no were. I kicked the ball so hard that i couldn't see it anymore.We had a race to the ball and i won i looked around for the ball and i saw an abandoned mansion. I knocked on the door and it swung open.

We walked in side and there was cobwebs every where i heard a noise upstairs so i tried to go out of the house when the door slammed shut. I was so scared and all of a sudden i heard footsteps coming towards me i ran to the kitchen and hid under the table. When i didn't notice any noise i came out from under the table and climbed out of the window then i wondered where my brother was. I noticed a stream of blood coming towards me and then i noticed that the body was my brothers and i cried until i couldn't cry no more. Then i marched back inside the mansion and screamed until the owner was stood in front of me. I started punching him until he put a gun towards my head then i told him to do it so i could be with my brother and to my surprise he did it. THE END



Comments

  • Leanne Cooper

    Leanne Cooper

    epic story

    Oct 01, 2017

  • if the progtagonist watches horror movies, he would think twice before entering the mansion

    Oct 01, 2017

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