Kingdom Hearts Maria's Adventures #: 1. Read Count : 118

Category : Books-Fiction

Sub Category : Adventure
Chapter One - DiZ:

Maria  is sketching a picture of a seashell while humming , but Riku snatched her sketchbook from her hand. 

" Riku , it's not funny anymore ", said Maria. 

Riku put it in her satchel. 

" You need to help us with the raft ", said Riku .

Maria  groaned. 

" Fine", said Maria. 

Riku left. 

" I better check the supplies ", said Maria  to herself. 

Then,  she heard a voice behind her. 

" Maria,  the worlds has been connected ", said the figure. 

" Who's out there ", asked Maria. 

 Then,  a corridor of darkness appeared that revealed a man with bandages on his face. 

" DiZ is who is I am  known ", said DiZ.

" What do you want from me ", asked Maria. 

" I want you to choose ", said DiZ.

" How can I choose ", asked Maria. 

" Go to Radiant Garden  and meet your 3 guardians ", said DiZ. 

Then,  DiZ disappeared. 

Comments

  • It's really good but try to make it a little longer as the reader can't really get a sense of what the story is about. It's a good start though.

    Sep 24, 2017

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