Pt. 1 Read Count : 199

Category : Books-Fiction

Sub Category : Adventure
Why does it have to end like this?
At first, Rod thought of this while seeing Reaven destroying all of the city without hesitation, it seemed like there was nothing able to stop him from doing such a thing. "You've got to do something Rod, you're the only alive person who can match up with him, ¡we're begging you!", said Paul, who was blinded by this unusual feeling of despair and agony of watching the entire town he built, the people he strengthened his bonds with and Marie, his loved one, vanishing almost instantly because of the energy shockwave Reaven produced. All of the refugees were at the Elder's Palace, which was known for ages to be the place where the strongest fighters were built, but, even though it all happened as a matter of hours, it seemed it's been ages since the last warrior going out to protect everyone. His name was Keith. Him alongside Brooke went out to take on Reaven. 

-Reaven: "How you dare to compare your power to the one of a god?"
Keith&Brooke: "We're the saviors of people, ¡we're the ones who justice itself picked to defeat you! 
R: "How cute, you are actually thinking justice can be done in this already doomed world. Hahaha"
K&B: "¡We are the peace-warriors, Keith and Brooke and we are going to defeat you!
R: "Then start."

And the fight began. At first the two heroes kept up a close fight, delivering synchronized kicks and punches, it all looked like it could be posible for them to stop what Reaven was doing. It continued that way for several minutes until Reaven countered them, he grabbed Keith's arm, and slammed him with Brooke and shoot a power blast that was able to leave them on the floor, agonizing and begging for mercy. But it was too late. 

R: "Okay, I'm done with testing your strength, now ¡take this!"(grabs Keith and smashes him with Brooke and then shoots an enormous power blast leaving them on the floor.)
K&B: "Justice... can... nev..."
Reaven keeps toying with them, like it was just a game.
R: " I told you not to fight. I gave you the chance of giving up and just dying in a fast way, but no, you had to have hope, so silly."
K&B: "¡STOP IT!"

Suddenly, Keith and Brooke had an inmense power up due to their faith and anger, produced by the one who killed their comrades. An inmense energy barrier appeared and they stood up, weakened by their damaged bodies but enfuriated enough to not feel pain.
K&B: " This aura, this spiritual energy, this anger and this power, ¡will be the one to obliterate you! ¡Now take this!" 

And a new fight began, this incredible power was actually making Reaven fight back with seriousness, and the two heroes were in their prime. Reaven took Keith's punches, which lead to an amazing combination between the heroes to perform their most powerful attack, an attack that was supposed to defeat an enemy in one hit, with the consequence of the total innability of the body.

K&B: "¡This is the end!" 
K&B: "Take this, the ultimate combo"
K: "¡Rainbow hurricane!"
B: "¡Rainbow dash!
R: "Why you?!!"

The massive shockwave lead to an explosion full of colors, and making everyone think evil was gone. Keith and Brooke were devastated by that attack, barely capable of standing up, but happy that the fight was over. 

B: "It's all over, we managed to defeat Reaven in honor of our fallen comrades"(coughs)
K: "Yeah, we did it. Though our bodies are pretty much gone now."
A voice sounds from the ashes
R: "Was that it?"
K&B: "What?!!"
R: "I said, was that it?"
K: "How?! How could you survive the rainbow leap? It is an insta-kill technique."
R: "As I told you, don't dare to compare yourselves to a god."
B: "You broke a sweat, we now know your limit, you so-called god, haha."
R:" Oh really? Your really think so?, funny, at least."
B:"Oh yeah? Then how do you call the last five minutes, we were literally beating the crap out of you!"
R: "Pity."

Reaven walked slowly to Keith and Brooke's half dead bodies and stabbed them both with an arrow, making them suffer and scream so hard that even the refugees could hear them from miles off.

K&B: "Please... don't kill... us"

Faith was lost, the two strongest warriors begging for clemency just made things look even worse than it were.

R: "Begging? Disgusting."
R:"¡Now perish!"

They were gone, the power blast erased them from Earth, the end was finally here.



••••Author note••••
Hello! I hope you like this, it is my first story ever so, it would be nice if you comment if you like it or not, and your suggestions for me to keep getting better! Thank you for reading!

Comments

  • Mario Esteban

    Mario Esteban

    It is my first time writting something so, it would be really nice to get your Opinions and suggestions

    Apr 16, 2017

  • Mario Esteban

    Mario Esteban

    Thank you for reading!

    Apr 16, 2017

  • Erica D

    Erica D

    great job!

    Apr 16, 2017

  • Apr 16, 2017

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