Helpppp! Read Count : 149

Category : Stories

Sub Category : Suspense/Mystery
Shhh... She is coming!All of them are ! Who is there ? Hello Ahhhh!!! Help . No don't harm me please Revengers. I haven't done anything to you nooooo!! Ihave a family. boom!Hahahaha victory! He is out of the way. Now for Rachel!

Rachel Darron was crying at 18 mulbury Street England in her house . This was because her father William Darron had been murdered yesterday at about 8pm by the Revengers. Nobody knew who the Revengers were and why they killed people. Some people say it is because they want revenge but for what is the reason.Rachels mom was also crying and her maskara was messed all over her face and she was still in her pyjamas . It was hard for her to stop crying,but that wasn't all when she was on the phone she cried even harder but Rachel just thought it was her mom's boss telling her she was fired because for the next couple of days she didn't work.

Rachel's granny came and stayed with them for a few months ,and Rachel and her mom moved to Scotland with her granny and they stayed in a Castle on the hill. Her mom was very protective for some reason she never let Rachel out of her sight.

One day Rachel mom was in the bathroom and a lady knocked on the door Rachel asked who it was and the lady replied one of your grannys Freind's so Rachel let her in. That was a mistake ! The lady had a bag big enough to put an elephant in . She put the bag over Rachel and took her to England again.

Rachel was scared when she heard a awful crackly voice say she will be gone Tommorow! Rachel could not sleep she knew she was on a plane because it was so bumpy. 

Meanwhile Rachels mom was worried sick she had known the revengers were going after her family to 






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  • can you please write more to it.

    Sep 22, 2017

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