When The Sun Rises Read Count : 216

Category : Poems

Sub Category : N/A
( Hey guys it the author here, so I've been waiting some  time and I'm pleased with my other story and will be continuing. That's out of the way so for this story I tried to do something a little different then usual I'm doing poetry today hope you all like it and without furtherado let's start. ) 

                   When the sun rises 


When the sun rises, there is new hope.

When the sun rises, faith is born. 

When the sun rises, so does new life. 

When the sun rises, destiny is awoken. 

When the sun rises, hate is forgiven. 

When the sun rises, the beauty is unleashed. 

When the sun rises, secrets are told. 

When the sun rises, the world is forgiven.  
When the sun rises, it is a sign that we still have time. 

When the sun rises,  talents are discovered. 

When the sun rises, people are all freed and unleashed. 


                  When the sun rises, 
                           So do we. 

( so I'm not very sure that everyone understood because it's complex but um... Please follow, rate stars, share, and comment any ideas, thoughts,  suggestions. I guess well see you next time and read my other stories. . )

Comments

  • The word "author" is spelled with an "o", not a "e". Otherwise, enjoyable post.

    Sep 12, 2017

  • Melanie  Cabrera

    Melanie Cabrera

    E writer thank you so much for your support i was going through my other storoes and saw that you commented as well. ill keep writing for sure!

    Sep 14, 2017

  • lemme tell you this, when the sun rises, melanie will write again...nice job!

    Sep 17, 2017

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