Behind Me Read Count : 108

Category : Poems

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Behind my smile is a hurting heart, behind my laugh, I’m falling apart. Look closely at me, and you will see, the girl I am, it isn’t me anymore.”

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  • David Lorenz

    David Lorenz

    The last four words could be replaced with "just isn't me." Sorry if you don't like my opinion, but my suggestion rhymes a little bit better.

    Aug 23, 2017

  • thanks for your suggestion though your opinion i kinda like it

    Aug 23, 2017

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