Summertime
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Category : Poems
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Windows open,
A nice breeze is coming....
It brings us,
fresh air,
and
delicious scents.
Maybe,
outside...
from flowers,
berries,
and
green leaves.
Or.... possibly....
The coffee beans,
from next door.
'one little invitation',
.... come and see..
this will be certainly,
for more!
Comments
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Patrick Connors
the mere mention of coffe beans in that probally close to mid poem. in contrast with its over levle (Tones) of naturalistic imagery. would give Mad flava to your taste of finery, exqisite food. probally expresso, in minute' levels, more ice coffe and designer drinks. yet to the finery of simplistics. nature walks for inspiration. my pain my love as my joy is mine. blessed be my dear sister of the muse. let you be blessed in Jesus name with 3 published books. believe to recieve if you wish. agreement is all thats necessitious.
Aug 10, 2021