Villain Diaries 2 Read Count : 168

Category : Books-Fiction

Sub Category : YoungAdult
Chapter 2

The music here is extremely loud, I can barely hear myself think.... 
"Lana! We're over here!" I hear someone call. I search the crowd for the owner of the voice, and next to the bar I find none other than James and my two friends, Lila and Aciaa. James and I have been dating for three years, and to this day, are madly in love.

I work my way towards the group, weaving between sweaty bodies. "Hey guys" I say when I finally get there. "Save me a drink?" I ask, knowing that with my powers alcohol has very little affect. James pulls a shot glass out from behind him and holds it above his head, his lips puckered up for a kiss. 

James is a decent bit taller than I, so he has to lean downwards for me to kiss him, I kiss him once, reaching for the drink just above my head. He finally let's go with a, "I never get tired of that." As I turn to greet our two friends, they turn with an eye roll and fade into the crowd, searching for their entertainment for the night.



Note from the author: 
I just wanted to say thank you for reading! If you wouldn't mind leaving some feedback on how to improve my writings and the techniques that I use. Or, if you'd like, leave a rating to let me know what you think! Thank you all!

~QueenLoser

Comments

  • I like the way you write and the story is interesting, I just think the chapters need to be a little longer.

    Aug 09, 2017

  • Queen Loser

    Queen Loser

    Thank you all. :) As I said, I will begin to make the chapters longer. I was doing a few test runs before officially letting the story go on

    Aug 10, 2017

  • for the most part, looks good. agreed about length

    Aug 10, 2017

  • Amazing book queen loser very interesting so far and what jared said it would be a lot better if u made them longer

    Aug 09, 2017

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