Visions Of Venus Read Count : 53

Category : Poems

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Brown closed doors
Solid as stone pillars.
Eyes on every door
Watching me, watching you.
We danced with grace and joy 
As I tryed to set the sky ablaze,
The passion running through my vains
While Venus watched us.

I did my best
To put my visions of Venus to paper,
Yet everything I drew
Could not compare to her beauty,
Her golden curling hair,
The fire in her eyes.
She stood majestically
And so adorable in her splendor,
Nobody in the world comes close
Never could I capture that beauty
No matter how hard I tried
Every drawing I did wasn't good enough.
Felt hopeless as an Artist
To not be able to do Venus justice.

The walls came tumbling down,
One of Venus's stallions
Galloped with fury
Taking the ground below
Into the heavens.
I watched in awe as Venus
Peeled back the heavens above with her hand
Like if the sky was pages in a book
To help some of us somehow reach her
Like if we could climb a window in the sky
That would lead us into Olympus
And escape into her world
Just to catch another glimpse
Of her beauty.

Venus gently carresed Nats hair
To bless Nat
    With a good happy life
To find a love 
    That would furfill
    Nat's every need and desire.

Naked we danced in ecstasy
  Our flesh covered by wild animals
Screams of pleasure in the air
  I could never find Venus
But I found my Venus in loving Nat. 


  • This flowed so easily and fluidly I kind of got lost in the moment and not too sure if I potrayed what I had in mind to its best, yet lit up a celabratory smoke upon its completion, had to flick a flame to celebrate a tribute to Venus and Nat.

    Sep 06, 2020

  • Sep 06, 2020

  • Sweet!

    Sep 06, 2020

  • Sep 08, 2020

  • I enjoyed it !!

    Sep 16, 2020

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