Category : Books-Fiction

Sub Category : Suspense/Mystery

Hello, I'm a new writer  desiring to learn fast from you. 
Please let me know, what emotion does this short 100 word piece evoke from you?  Also, comments are welcome. 


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Hello mom, 

It's the 1st of August and my time... 
...my time is almost up. 
I'm scared. 

The light’s closing in on me, the people know enough already, more than I planned. 

They see now, sadly; and lies no longer work. 

See how I turned out, a bloodsucking pedophile, but my money saved as many lives. Will they understand? 


The voices too are coming. 
The dealmakers. 
They need more blood than I can supply, I failed. 

They're coming mom, I feel them closing in. They'll crush me and I don't want to live to see it.


Your soon-to-die son, 
Bill 


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