Apr 21, 2020 | Rating : | Written by Alex Martinez
My Hidden PainRead Count : 143
Category : Poems
Sub Category : N/A
Behind my smile, is a hurting heart Behind my laugh, I'm failing apart Looking closely into my eyes, you will see, The girl I am, is dying inside
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Apr 21, 2020
Its wonderful .But at the end when u said dieing inside you should add "me "to it .So it would ended up being "dieing inside of me"the me will ryme with the "see in the third to last line.Thumbs up though
