Apr 21, 2020 | Rating : | Written by Alex Martinez
My Hidden Pain Read Count : 170

Category : Poems

Sub Category : N/A
Behind my smile,
is a hurting heart
Behind my laugh,
I'm failing apart
Looking closely into my eyes,
you will see,
The girl I am,
is dying inside 

Comments

  • Apr 21, 2020

  • Its wonderful .But at the end when u said dieing inside you should add "me "to it .So it would ended up being "dieing inside of me"the me will ryme with the "see in the third to last line.Thumbs up though

    Apr 21, 2020

  • Apr 21, 2020

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