Feb 17, 2020 | Rating : | Written by Brandon Burky
FAMILY Read Count : 64

Category : Poems

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Gathered forever togetherness
No pressure for pleasure 
Pure tenderness
Treasure this effortless thoughtfulness
No disadvantages no predjudice
Love , laugh , live ,
With extended forgiveness
Always effort fulfilling your wish list
With such willingness
It's ubiquitous
I give testiment I've bared witness
To the familiar richness
Amidst blessed kinship..

Comments

  • Your context is cliché, but the context an image you're trying to create is there. I recommend, trying to adjust the use of cliché lines by giving them their own symbolic verses.

    Feb 18, 2020

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