Vampire Heart Read Count : 43

Category : Stories

Sub Category : Drama
Teeno is a 19 year old boy and one day he woke up to see his mother say' morning honey. Teeno put on his red shirt and jacket after he sprung out of bed. Mum im gonna go see sam. Sam is his best friend , he went out with sam to find his father. Eventually he found him . His name is arthur and teeno and sam visited him. Turned out he was a king of England, teeno was told by his mum that arthur and him were vampires. After sam and Teeno finish their visit , Teeno gets called back to live with him but he could bring one person. He chose sam, and arthur was ran over by a car so since teeno was practically heir to the throne so he became king with sam as the queen

Comments

  • it was good and this coment is just help. it seemed like this was just the baselin of your story, if you keep writing and editing adding detail and things lime metaphor, similie, nouns, verbs, adverbs it will be great 📖

    Jul 12, 2017

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