Being There Read Count : 23

Category : Poems

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The rain came down like thunder
Tears falling from her eyes 
I tried to soothe her -calm her down
It worked -to my surprise 

Sometimes a show of empty 
Can help a soui in need 
Just simple- warm and sincere words
Is a valuable good dee

Sometimes we act like evperts
Trying to help with their distress
  It often results in overkill’
And makes a further mess

Our intentions may be strongly pure
We truly are concerned.
 But compiicating an issue emotionally 
Can hamper a wishful turn 

To help a person reaching out 
Is a valiant thing- that’s true 
Whenever to occasion arises
It’s a credit for you to do 


  • Dec 01, 2019

  • Dustin Ryan Bliss

    Dustin Ryan Bliss

    How Beauitful :)

    Dec 01, 2019

  • there is a few spelling errors. I type fast so I understand that it was probably a slip up.

    Dec 01, 2019

  • i love it.

    Dec 01, 2019

  • Dec 01, 2019

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