The Pain Of Storms Read Count : 54

Category : Poems

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Oh how the day sleeps
And how the night came
The man heart's weeps
As it began to rain

The winds blow
The windows shake
The heart in woe
And later it breaks

Stronger and stronger
The rain becomes a storm
Harder and harder
Soon the heart deforms

Lightning shines
And thunder sounds
A heart beats
In sorrow a man drowns

The waves like mountains
The storm rages on
The heart slows
It cant carry on

Every storm pass
And the sun never fails to rise
But the heart is dead
And so the man dies

Comments

  • I the rhythmic flow, but I feel like you have more words to choose from. make it crisp.

    Oct 03, 2019

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  • Maurice  Beres

    Maurice Beres

    Well donee 🦋🦋🦋

    Oct 04, 2019

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