The Man Part 1 Read Count : 217

Category : Poems

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I could have said no;
I could have lied low.
But no! I carelessly took the risk.
Was is stupidity,was it love;
Was is the fear of not being loved?
It's a story I can not tell.
"Give me your heart and I'll give you my all"
I succumbed, without second thought.
Those words those glorious words,they struck my heart. 
And yes my heart I did give , and his all he did give.
All yes,all but his heart.
He locked it and into the depth of the sea he threw the key to my heart.
My oblivion he didn't spare, my naivety he found rare.
He used me, oh dare I say He used me!
I lost the life to live ,the life to love ,the life to laugh. 
But just when the sun was about to set,
When all hope seemed lost,
All corners seemed dark;
A flicker of light appeared.
One whose aura and charisma radiates goodness.
Shall I trust him and start anew?


  • Sep 11, 2019

  • Ethel Wellington

    Ethel Wellington


    Sep 11, 2019

  • Maurice  Beres

    Maurice Beres

    It’s a matter of trust 🦋you’v been burned once🦋listen to your brain- your soul and your heart 🦋is it worth the risk to be burned twice🦋look at the history of broken relationships 🦋dig deep before You decide🦋🦋🦋

    Sep 11, 2019

  • Joel Ankan

    Joel Ankan

    Great piece girl, keep it up

    Sep 14, 2019

  • Norkie  Ninson-Burns

    Norkie Ninson-Burns


    Oct 30, 2019

  • Musah Ibn Zakaria

    Musah Ibn Zakaria

    I love the poem!!! Pal keep it up

    Oct 31, 2019

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