Queens Read Count : 30

Category : Songs

Sub Category : Country

I try to reason with you, I tried to talk to you but all you wanted to do was walk. I thought we weren't the type to argue and fight I thought we were loving like kings and queens but I saw the way you laughed and talked it up with her and I saw the way your blue eyes shined when she's made you smile and now you're packing up your things and you haven't even said a word to me and I bet she's out there sitting in your car laughing up a storm talking to all her friends saying how she won you over how she stole you from another woman. Does she know your favorite food, does she know your favorite color, how about your favorite movie, boy does she love you the way I do what dose she have that I don't. I try to reason with you, I tried to talk to you but all you wanted to do was walk. I thought we weren't the type to argue and fight I thought we were loving like kings and queens but I saw the way you laughed and talked it up with her and I saw the way your blue eyes shined when she's made you smile. I guess it's too late now the pull you back to wrap you up the hold you tight say baby please not tonight, I thought we weren't the type to argue and fight I thought we were loving like kings and queens but I saw the way you laughed and talked it up with her and I saw the way your blue eyes shined when she's made you smile and now you're packing up your things and you haven't even said a word to me and I bet she's out there sitting in your car laughing up a storm talking to all her friends saying how she won you over how she stole you from another woman. Because baby I thought we were loving like, loving like kings and queens-!!

Comments

  • needs work. grammar and punctuation! it's just one constant run-on sentence. And maybe do it as more of a Collection. Different letters or entries to different characters, and put them in a collection. :) good work!

    Sep 05, 2019

  • Sep 05, 2019

  • Maurice  Beres

    Maurice Beres

    Sep 08, 2019

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