Category : Stories
Sub Category : Horror
Once there was a boy named Jimmy. Jimmy had a really bad life. He work's hard A lot. He has mean friends. Does not get to go outside that much. And paparazzi come after him.... Every 10 min
But then there was a fan and a stalker. Jimmy heard a bump. So he checked the security camera... and he caught the grin in HIS BASEMENT The grin says Ehhhh what's that Jimmy says Hello Jimmy hears Running and the grin Screams ERRRR and grabs Jimmy and eats him next paparazzi come and see broken glass and honestly I already know....... THE GRIN
Now all over the news it saying Grin/JimmyFan/Stalker is killing people And 400 people has been eaten by him even......................... I whisper You too cause
I am the grin reading you this book
The end.
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Nichole Broderick
Needs work on quoting when a characters speaks or then nothing makes sense, like this- Wrong: Dallas looked at me and and said ewwww your ugly and walked away while grinning and saying disease she’s a disease Right: Dallas looked at me and said “ewwww your ugly!” And Walked away saying “Disease, she’s a disease!” While grinning Hope this helped!
Aug 11, 2019