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  there are some wild phrased there. i like this

  Aug 22, 2019

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  Maurice Beres

  Very well written 🦋your poem is more effective without an explanation 🦋It the reader the opportunity for interpretation There is absolutely nothing wrong with wanting to explain it🦋your explanation is real good prose and would also be effective if written as a separate piece 🦋great work🦋🦋🦋🦋

  Aug 22, 2019

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  Aug 24, 2019