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Jun 23, 2019 | Rating : | Written by Jennifer Hamilton

Edge Of Reason Read Count : 219

Category : Poems

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Flat and almost without a ripple 
The water stretches on  through the twilight 
Into the darkness we journey as the  edge of the world disappears further towards the darkness of night 
What difference does a lone vessel Sailing into the seemingly endless void make 
Not one to be noted by a ship ; or any traveler who might cast a glimpse upon its wake . 
The journey is perilous ,yet worth every moment of its wonder
Made with hope of peace
People speak of these thoughts as madness  but still search for them and a way to escape fans make the endless drifting cease 
The journey is long and yet is so close to our hearts 
Perhaps to sail within is the only way to discover life’s true parts . 
May our souls ripple gently through time and find the tides of serenity and rest
The true ocean of mans dreams that we will sail upon the best

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Jun 23, 2019
Jun 23, 2019
Maurice Beres

Outstanding 🦋🦋🦋🦋🦋

Jun 24, 2019
Daniellenic Tharp

puncuation would do u great justice. its hard to follow. very, very good tho.

Aug 04, 2019
very beautifully written

Aug 25, 2019
Joey George-Hancock

Omg!! My goodnes! Vivid. Easy but very literate read. Visual. To the point. Such a beautiful story, poem and great rhyming rhythm. Almost like a spell, a prayer or the foretold prophecy to the ending of a book.

Sep 05, 2019
Arianna Marel Maestas Rael

that cool

Sep 14, 2019
Oct 13, 2019
I love this poem Jennifer!

Oct 26, 2019
Nov 23, 2019

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Maurice Beres

Daniellenic Tharp

Joey George-Hancock

Arianna Marel Maestas Rael