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BeterMan 1: the very bad begin of a legend     

By The jguy51106               

Case 1

Chapter 1 Origin

 Okay so you should know me already the hero BeterMan you know I saved the city then I saved it again and again and again in these story’s or chapters the one telling them are me and this weird Narrator guy that acts like a author I can’t say for reasons and is working on my case can you believe it Uh hello super hero here. I’m basically the childhood of many children this is my story of saving the city again. I live in New York and go to Bronx High School of Science and I’m one of the top 5 smartest students. I’m in second place anyway what I’m saying is I am Beter Parker and I am your neighborhood BeterMan

So how it happened when my uncle Vernon died I was pissed and ran to my aunt and on the next day my class went  on a field trip to the spider museum. Once we got there we went to learning about spiders when a spider crawled in my arm and bit me. But it wasn’t any spider it was the beeeeeeeeeter spider and that is pretty much it. And the next few chapters are the beginning of me becoming BeterMan at the age of 16

Chapter 2 Having you heard I’m Beter

  So now that you know how it happened I’m trying to discover what the spider did to me like a normal person I went to the hospital and they said nothing happened to me so I was glad. Then I went back home but my body was aching with pain “auhhh” I said as I walked through the streets I thought “was I having a stomach ache”. Then once I made it home and told aunt Sunny I was having a stomach ache and she wasn’t concern and gave me medicine for my stomach I went to bed in sweat.

  I was moving in my sleep with sweat everywhere then I screamed out loud “ahhhhhhh everything hurts” and then aunt April comes into the room and screams “ what the frick  is happening in here”. I woke up and said in agony “everything hurts I’m not alright “well boy what do you have” aunt Sunday yelled at me. I replayed with “ my insides hurt all over and my throat is really sore my stomach is on fire and I’m having this terrible headache.” “Wait let me see your arm” aunt Sunny said as I held out my hand there were red and yellow marks there shaped like a circle that spelled out beter “ no not you how!” She said strongly. “When were you bitten” she screamed at my face “ what do you mean” I replied “don’t be foolish boy when were you bitten by the beeeeeeeeeter spider” she said “ what is the beeeeeeeeeter spider” I replied.

 “The spider Mark ,were you bitten by a spider Beter” she said “ I was bitten on the day of the field trip but i couldn’t tell what spider it was” I replied. “What did you do after you left the field trip or after school” she said I replied “I went to the hospital but they found nothing wrong”. She murmurd “ of course they wouldn't have found anything” then she opened her mouth and said “ you will become BeterMan”. “Who or what is BeterMan” I replayed “ He was the neighborhood’s hero and your uncle” she said.

 “What the heck but, okay tell me how Uncle Vernon was a BeterMan” I said, then she said “ he was New York’s superhero In the 1987” “old” I interrupted “oh sorry sorry” I replied as she looked at me seriously. “Anyway your uncle Vernon got bitten by the same spider in high school and used its powers to become BeterMan” she said. “But how do you get into the story” I said “ I was getting to that any way I was in the same class as him and we got together then he eventually asked. Me out and I accepted then I found out he was BeterMan and kept his secret identity” she said “okay but what will I do” I said “you will become BeterMan” she said.

Chapter 3 That time I trained with aunt Sunny

  The next day aunt Sunny had woken me up early on Saturday at 5 am “Wake up time for your training it’s going to be hell from now on so your going to be determined on being BeterMan” Aunt Sunny said. “Wait you were serious last night” I replied “ Of course I am” she said “lord my aunt has gone crazy” I murmured she heard what I said and grabbed my arm and pulled me out of the bed I never knew she had this much strength even though she was old. “Okay let's go” she said I groan but followed her outside she made me go to the roof and said okay do a double u but have your thumb sticking out and nothing happened. “ What is this suppose to do” I said that’s weird webs were supposed to come out” she replied “ dang it Aunt I could be watching the “PIZZA TIME!” meme right now” I screamed at her.

 The webs came out “What the heck” I said “ahh now that’s how you activate it” she said I did the sign again and more webs came out and landed in our neighbor's house “now swing over their” she said. “Are you crazy?” I replied how could I jumped off the building” I screamed “just do it” she said and pushed me off. Scared as I was I swinged over there in my thoughts I thought my aunt had killed me and held onto the web very tight and made it on top of the neighbors house. I then felt amazed that I didn’t die and laughed then the neighbors door opened and Ms.le went outside and looked at the roof seeing me stand their.

 

 “What the hell are you doing up their Beter!” she screamed so loud then I looked at our roof and saw that  aunt Sunny wasn’t their. I’m gonna kill her I thought in my head and said “nothing” “what the bloody hell do you mean nothing” she said. After 15 minutes of explaining a lie why I was up their I went back home and once I got their I shouted and argued with Aunt Sunny and after a few hours I went back up their. And thought to myself I have to do this and was determined to swing through houses.

The I said “PIZZA TIME” and webs came out to the next house. I was sorting through the sky laughing then a child was sitting on a porch eating ice cream and he caught a glimpse of me while I swinged through his house but at that moment I covered my face. Then I went back to my house swinging and once I make it there I look at aunt Sunny who was laughing and said “I have a theory what if every time you say pizza time you can use your webs for 1 minute but if you keep saying it for example like 4 times you get 4 minutes.” “Okay that makes sense” I replied “now it’s time for me to train you physically” she said. It has been 2 months since aunt Sunny had said that and Beter learned Martial arts, Kung fu, and karaty and was ready to become BeterMan.

Chapter 4 School day’s

 During those 2 month of training Beter Parker still had time for his school work and studying and was still in the top two spot of the smartest intelligents in school. In the first spot you have Rebecca Stacy and she’s in 3 of Beters classes, At that moment I walked up to her and asked “Hey Rebecca do you have a minute” I asked her. “Oh yes I have a minute so what do you want” she replied “Oh I uhh just wanted to say if I could uhh just uhh get the pencil I lend you yesterday” I studered  “Oh I forgot about that” she said as she handed it to me. “Thanks” I said mumbuling, okay so the truth is that I like Rebecca but I’m just too afraid to ask her out like you know what I mean if you’ve ever been in love.

 Beter walked back to his seat and sat in silent, after 45 minutes of class it was finally over and Beter walked out of his class thinking “was I weird in front of her because I studered too much” as I walked through the hall I bumped into a girl named  Katy Wing a student who is good at sports and is ranked 4th in intelligen’s.

“Watch where you're going” she said as she passed me “Sorry Katey” I said as she was walking away, Beter Parker went to his next class took some notes and finished it a hour later. Then it was time for lunch when Beter went in the cafeteria and bought lunch from the schools stands and sat next to his friend Nathan. “What’s up with you” Nathan asked “Well I got into a short talk with Rebecca and I think she thinks I’m weird” I responded.

 “Hey look at you growing a pair and talking to a girl” Nathan said “oh shut up why do you grow a pair” I said to him as we both laughed. Then the fire alarm was signaling and everyone was screaming  and running out of the building and Beter also did. Mostly everyone was outside when, “Help Help Rebecca is stuck in the 2nd floor and there’s fire everywhere” said one of Rebecca’s friend. Then out of nowhere Beter ran into the fire and everyone around him were screaming “ no don’t go in there.”

 Teachers were trying to stop Beter but he was too strong and fast for him, “ On my gosh did I just run past a teacher anyway what the F#$K am I doing” Beter thought. As I ran through the buildings up the stairs I saw her on the floor uncuation so I ran through the fire and picked her up she was very warm. Then I began to run through the fire again covering her so she couldn’t get burned “don’t worry because HAMBURGER” I said. Then I said “ FLINT LOCKWOOD” and I ran so fast that I made to the exit door in one second and bursted outside were people congratulated me then Rebecca woke up.

Chapter 5 Golden time

 After 1 month of no school the parts of Bronx High School of Science that were destroyed were rebuilt and Monday was the day that we had to go back too bad we have to waist a month of summer for school. I learned during the month that I also had the power of memes so when I went outside to go to school  I yelled out “FLINT LOCKWOOD” and I ran so fast that I made it to school in .00000007 seconds. Once I went inside I got everything I needed from my locker and got 2 cards that were pink. I opened both of them and read them and they both said “Met me at the back off the school at 3:30pm”.

 After the long day I went outside at 3:29 and went to the back when I saw Rebecca standing there looking at me when I walked toward here. Then Katey came from the other direction and said “What is she doing here” then Rebecca said “what do you mean what are you doing her” then they looked at me. “Why are you both looking at me I just came her because a pink envelope told me to come her?” I said as I looked at both of them. “Wait she’s not with you” they both said at the same time then Rebecca and Katey said at the same time “ How many envelopes did you get” “just two” I said.

 They both looked at each other and walked a short distance were I couldn’t hear the conversation they were having so I just stood there. Then they walked back to me and Rebecca said the words that literally shocked my heart and Katey seemed worried and gasped hearing these words. Rebecca said “Hey Beter want to go out” then Katey said “ No go out with me”, the truth is that Katey loved Beter in their freshman year but she was too nervous to tell him for the pasts 2 semester and she had the courage on this day too tell him but someone had to intervene. And if you were wondering what the conversation that Rebecca and Katey had back there I am sorry to say that you will not be able to hear intel chapter 6 for the very reason that Rebecca and Katey tell Beter what they had said.

Chapter 6 Waiting in the summer

 Around the time that this story is taking place is on May 30th were the students at Bronx High School of Science have 31 days or a month of school left to get into their vacation because of the fire. So as you know of why this chapter is called waiting in the summer it’s because student have to wait in June which is the start of summer until it’s July for their vacation. You are probably wondering right now why are you listening to me and not the story of Beter Parker but this information is sort of important in future chapters. We all know that the readers want to know what Rebecca and Katey were talking about in secret and I will tell you or they will say it after this just know this happened after Beter said he got two notes.

 “Hey Katey what is Beter talking about 2 notes if he was only supposed to review one?” Rebecca asked “what do do you mean” Katey replied. “What I mean is that I sent Beter a love letter then you just come out of nowhere and are interfering with my plan on making him my boyfriend” she whispered. “What the H$&l do you mean I was the one that sent him the note and I’m the one that was supposed to meet him today” Katey responded. Then Katey said “ We’ll you only like him because he saved you from that fire” “that’s not true I been liked him since we were in the 2nd grade” Rebecca said.

 Some readers might be interested or think whatever’s I don’t care but I am sorry to say as my job of the BeterMan case or “Narrator” I have to tell you anyway. So Rebecca and Beter have gone to the same elementary school and middle schools but Beter has forgotten her once the beginning of his freshman year and focused a lot on his studies. Beter has been friends with her in elementary school and protected her from Bullies and once saved her life by Rebecca jumping into a lake because she was young and didn’t know about death almost drowned intel Beter saw her drowning and went to save her. The other time was in their middle school year In the 7th grade when Rebecca was being jumped by a bunch of girls without Beter knowing and once he forgot his notes in the class and saw what they were doing to her. Beter rushed in and the 3 girls that were beating up Rebecca we’re teasing both of them with examples that are being shown, “ohh your boyfriend going to save you”, “hey why don’t you let this s#&t alone and go back to your sports”. But with all of these taunts or bullies that he dealt with he did it because Rebecca was his friend and one of his friends, anyway let’s get back to the main story or the story that occurring right know.

 But I do have to say that information is important for a story to make senses in Elementary school and middle school Rebecca began to form feelings. It was like if Beter was her knight in shining armor how they became friends you might ask if your a deep reader or a teacher who is getting or isn’t interested in this story. It all started in the 3rd month of school in first grade when Beter had no where to eat in his schools cafeteria and saw Rebecca sitting their alone. Once he sat down she didn’t look at him and Beter didn’t know what to say intel he said these very words.

 “Why don’t you try to make friends” I asked her then she looked at me angrily and said “why don’t you sit somewhere else then here and leave me alone.” “Well do you see any table open” I replied then she said “well you wouldn’t have ever talked to me if the tables weren’t full except for this one.” For some reason inside me I felt annoyed but at the same time sorry for the very reason that she doesn’t have any friends so then I said calmly. “Wanna be friends” she looked at me and her eyes were opened fully and said “Haven't you heard the rumors” she said and I knew what she was talking about everyone knew about it but I don’t believe in that.

 The thing is that in the first week of first grade a teacher who I will not name because it’s not important right now had a basket were students had to put money in a enveloped inside for their months payment of food. Rebecca and Beter were I charged that week to send it to the office at 11 o’clock but once it turned that time the money was missing. A student named Natasha stole the money at around 10 o’clock when no one was looking and put it in his bag. But when it turned 11 o’clock and the teacher asked for it and the money was missing she got scared and said out loud “I know who has the money” then the teacher said “who.”

 She got up and began to walk toward Rebecca with the money in her sleeves and opened her book bag putting the money inside secretly and said out loud. “Rebecca took it” and took out the money from her bag while the entire class had looked at her. You can imagine the expression that Rebecca had made and the teacher sending her to the principal at her while she tried to explain but couldn’t. I will now continue with the 3rd person story in the next paragraph that is not the complete history of Rebecca and have more information of her but I could only give you this information for now.

 After the two confessions were made Beter was having a lot of feelings in his heart that I will now turn him into the “Narrator” for a while. “Oh my F**$’;g Gosh I have been asked out by two gorgeous Girls what should I do which one should I pick I love Rebecca but I also have feelings for Katey” thought Beter. “So if both of us confessed which one will you chose?” Said Rebecca confided that she would be the one that will be getting chosen. “Yeah which one will you chose me or Rebecca” said Katey “ well it’s pretty obvious that he will choose me I am ranked at the top and I’m more gorgeous than you” said Rebecca “Um guys I will need some time to think” I said as they turned their heads to look at me.

Chapter 7 Beter Chan can’t study

 It has been one week since the act of the both confessions and the week had been normal like always except one thing. Training with aunt Sunny was like always, Doing Homework was like always, but Beter couldn’t study because of the thought of both of them confessing to him and he had to pick one of them. It was midnight we're Beter thought to himself “I’m going for a walk” as he went outside and said “FLINT LOCKWOOD” and ran so fast that Beter made it to his destination at his nearest park in 1 military second. While he was swinging on the swing he heard in his ears “Beep beep beep” it was a loud sound and said “PIZZA TIME” 18 times and went for a swing. “Okay okay I have 18 minutes to stop whatever a villain is doing I could just run there really fast but nah this can help me with my swinging trainer and it’s fun” I thought in my head.

 Beter was swinging from right to left when he made it to a bank were there was a man there that was using his teeth to bite of a vault. When it opened there were loads of money there and he put it there then Beter said out loud “FLINT LOCKWOOD” and ran so fast that he suplexed the villain and got up. “Stop there evil scum” said Beter than the man looked at me but his face didn’t show he had a mask on a scary looking one if I say so myself. Then out of nowhere he ran at me and I dodged all his attacks and hit him very hard in the face that he didn’t have time to dodge and finally said “what is your name.”

Chapter 8 your name

 “Didn’t you hear what I said du&*#$s” I said loudly then the villain replied with “I’m eater man you won’t remember the day since you’ll be dead.” Then out of nowhere eater man sprinted toward me with his teeth taking massive bites  of air and with no second to waist I yelled out loud “PIZZA TIME!” And I did the hand gesture and swinged over him and I throw my webs at him trapping him “Boy what is this sorcery” Eater man said. “Oh you won’t be able to escape in 2 hours” I said then out of nowhere lights were shining at me and then after a few seconds he saw 2 cops getting out of their police car and they both said “Freeze” but I said “I never freeze” then I said “don’t worry I caught the robber” then one of the policeman said “what are those webs.” Then I said “ A man named BeterMan came in and stopped him” then the 2 policemen said “He’s back” really cheerfully but when I turned around I saw Eater man biting of the webs and I shouted “stop him” but it was too late he escaped.

 As you may know or don’t know how it feels to fail on something that has been so important to complete or couldn't do I can’t explain Beters feelings of that night.

Even though Beter is now famous for the boy that saved a girl or saw everything that Beter had done he was determined to find eater man and take him to jail. For the past 2 days Beter has been trying to find eater man but failed the good thing that happened after that night is Aunt Sunny giving him a suit the suit was red and blue and had the word Beter in the middle. And Beter also keep up with his school work intel at 4 o’clock Beter had to make a decision between choosing either Rebecca and Katy and he knew he had to choose one, I never told you my name but it is Jose Vasquez and it is part of my duty to tell you the BeterMan case.

Chapter 9 Why the h**l are you here Nathan

 So as you may know Beter will have to chose one girl but I tell you to read the next chapter if you don’t easily cringe. This chapter will be important because if you don’t read this you will find out who he picked in chapter 11 and not chapter 10 because of a unfortunate event. But as I’m talking I will give you a hint right know before you read it. You can guess who it is but who knows what might happen maybe a unfortunate event might occur.

  I went to the back at the school but once I made it there I notice Nathan there standing alone and thought to myself “man I haven’t been talking to him a lot ever since the bite.” I walked up to him and said “hey man how are you doing but he said nothing he looked said and finally he said “we can’t be friends anymore.” At this very moment Beter felt mixed emotions and said “ if that’s what you feel then Fine! Leave I have a meeting”. Then Nathan walked away but what Beter didn’t know is that chaos will be arriving sooner than he thought and both girls will be in trouble.

 As I stood still there Rebecca and Katey walked up to me and both said “Well what did you decided” and I began to answer when “BOOOOM!” there was an explosion that happened in the school wich sended a piece of concrete to fly and almost hit Rebecca. As you may know that Beter has a lot of skills that he inquired during the bite. And at that very moment he sung himself on her and avoided her getting Crushed then when they both stood up the three of them separated and ran away but Beter was getting his suit.

Chapter 10 Trinity 7

 As Beter began to ran to his locker to get his suit he noticed a familiar face it was Eater man biting up parts of the school as kids and teachers were running Beter made it to his locker. When he made it there he ran to the nearest bathroom and began to change into his suit and when he finished he ran out the bathroom. “Why the f**k is this happening I just wanted this day to be other with” Beter said out loud even though no one would have heard him. Beter ran and then said “FLINT LOCKWOOD” and made it outside instantly and ran to Eater man knocking him down stopping him from destroying more of the school.

 I ran and quickly punched Eater man in the face pushing his body back by a little bit “Why are you doing this?” I said as he got pushed back. “You almost killed my crush you b#4#h” I yelled at him then he began to speak and said “Pitiful of you.” Then at that moment I felt anger inside me and quickly punched him 5 times while he dodged them and then he went for a dodge but something in my mind told me to move. That thing in my mind that told me what to do saved my arm from getting chopped off and once I dodged his bit I quickly kicked him in the stomach to get him away from me. And once that happened he ran and went for a punch and hit me in the face in my mind my face was hurting from the blow but I continue to fight anyway then he hit me 5 times were I didn't have time to dodje his attack and fell on the floor.

 In the thoughts of Beter as he fought Eater he thought of ways to easily defeat Eater man and found a way how to and after this sentence you will know what he did. “PIZZA TIME” I yelled then quickly swinged up word while Eater man went for a bite and made a hole in the ground so big I could have been eaten. Then I said “PIZZA TIME” 5 more times which gave me 5 minutes of web swinging and quickly swung around Eater man while covering him in webs. By the time I finished he was covered in like 7 to 8 layers of sticky webs so I thought that he couldn't escape and quickly charged up my arm and said “100 percent SMAAAAAAASSSSSSSSSSHHHHHHHHHHHHHH” and hit him so hard the my hand let out a little bit of blood.

 

 I quickly went to him and saw that he was shortly knocked out so I went in front of him and I used my left hand to pulled off the mask and was shocked. At this moment Beter felt sad and mad at himself for allowing himself to let someone dear to him go a dark and evil path. “Nathan why are you?” It was Nathan behind the mask I didn't know what to do I have not been hanging out with him in such a long time was it my fault he went this path. Then out of nowhere Nathan woke up and bite off the webs he was trapped in and jumped ran then looked at me and said “why now!”

Chapter 11 Love is War

 It had been 2 days later since that event Nathan’s parents now had posters of him saying missing and school would continue tomorrow even though there was only ¾ of the school left. Beter felt loads of emotion but he handled it and the next day of school Rebecca and Katey both ignored Beter the entire day. Beter was fine with this because this gave him more time to think who he loved and more time to try and find Nathan and persuade him to stop his villainess way. You might be wondering why Nathan would do this but I tell you know that Nathans story will come in paragraph 3.

 The next day I felt calm and ready for the week and I already knew who I would chose to be my girlfriend and who I loved I thought long and hard last night. As I walked down the hallway I found Rebecca talking to some other girls and decided to walk over there and try to have a private conversation with her so I did that. Once I made it there I said “Hey Rebecca can we talk privately now?” I asked her and she opened her mouth then looked at her Girlfriends. “Sure we can talk” she responded then after 2 minutes of walking we made it outside and I said “I know who I’m going to choose” “who” she replied then I opened my mouth and said “I choose.”

   As you are wondering what was Nathan's backstory I had gotten his file from the ministry of unfinished paperwork of superheroes and Villains. And the following information I have in my hand reads out Nathan male and 16 when he turned into a villain lived in poverty. The only way he got into Bronx High School of Science were because of his grades and how he went for free since he playced 10th in intelligence. Throughout the freshman year and his 2nd year he made friends with Beter Parker and most of the lunch period ate nothing. He mostly hanged out with Beter intel his second year when Beter stopped hanging out with him for reasons that he did not know.

 Nathan was injected by a serum by a scientist that offered him 1 grand for him to try it and since Nathan lived in poverty that was the fasted way he could earn money for his family. You might assume why Nathan couldn't have just gotten a part time job but you see I have bad news for you the curtains come down on the stage. Nathan's parents both have cancer and lie in bed all day and Nathan had to keep buying medicine with the medicine he earned by doing dares and other things. But you may be like well what about the missing posters that Nathan's parents made and put on buildings and trees well they used all their energy left inside them.

 And as you know not all stories have happy endings, On June 8th M.R and M.S Smith passed away putting up their last poster of Nathan hoping he would go to them. But as you know Nathan was gone and  escaped school but when he returned back home he discovered the terrible truth the truth that his parents got killed and their Love on war with their Disease they died together but afraid what had happened to their son. The series of BeterMan has a lot of unfortunate events and this is one there are more than 1 unfortunate events in this books and others. My code name is thejguy51106 and I am here to file the caseof BeteMan and I will tell you that chapter 11 and 12 won't be having happy endings but terrible events.

Chapter 12 The rising of Nathan

 As you may know I told you the terrible story of  Nathan Smith and you may imagine how he is feeling right now all I have to say is that during this story taking place Nathan is on a rampage. And I know I know you want to continue off were Beter is telling Rebecca who he loves but you will have time later. Right know I will tell you were Nathan is and he is at his house opening his door. “CREEK” the door went as Nathan opened the door to his house and went inside then Nathan looked around his house and saw his parents dead then he yelled out “I WILL KILL YOU BETERMAN MARK MY WORDS.”

 I then told Rebecca “I choose you” then Katey came out of some bushes crying I felt bad but decided I needed to go with my heart. As you imagine how it might feel to get rejected without the person knowing or if the person does know it would feel harsh but Beter knew he had to face her face to face. “I’m sorry I really liked Rebecca since the beginning of freshman year and I only recently liked you since 3 months ago” as I said that Rebecca went in with a smile. Then Katey said out loud “I understand and thank you for telling me now in front of myself” after that I walked home happy knowing I had a girlfriend.

 As I walked home “Boooom” a loud noise erupted from 5 ft of me and saw Nathan there really angry and said “You killed my parents you son of a B**h!” I didn’t know what he meant by that I didn’t kill anyone but as I thought that Nathan ran at me with his Mouth open revealing his sharp teeth I jumped out of the way but his teach cut a little but of skin off. You might be wondering how Nathan got those sharp teeth well when I said Nathan’s backstory on chapter 10 I mention that he was earning money by taking serums from a private company. And that company is giving people all over the world strange and powerful powers and making people have bad powers to use it against humanity.

 I then shouted out loud “FLINT LOCKWOOD” and ran so fast that I knocked him down then I said out loud “HEY SISTERS” and a bunch of boys and girls came out my hand. At that moment my hand was in pain and bloody but the people were all attacking Nathan and Nathan was struggling of getting out of that position. “HAMBURGER” I shouted and a hamburger appeared from my un injured hand and I took a bite out of it and all my injuries were instantly healed. Then out of nowhere Nathan jumped really high opened his mouth really big and swallowed all of the people it was disgusting and I barfed and thought in my mind how could he do that.

Chapter 13 Beter X Nathan

 I quickly ran to him and punched him hard in the face then he recovered and hit me in the face then my body 5 times which made me land on my feet 3 feet from him. For awhile we converted fist to punches and legs to kick it was very tiring and wanted this to end but knew I had to keep fighting to get my friend back. When you have a fight with a friend you both don’t talk to each other for a while intel you or that person apologize then continue being friends. But that case is different in Beter’s fight because he is fighting to get his feeling back and not trying to apologize for the reason that Beter did not kill Nathan’s parents it was Nathan.

 “Why did you do it huh you knew what I did and almost killed Rebecca so you wanted revenge” Nathan screamed “No I didn’t kill your parents!” I said. “!Liar!” Nathan screamed and punched me very hard in the stomach making me spit out saliva then I lead out a scream “Why would I kill your parents.” And hit him very hard 4 times in his face then he went for a hit but I dodge he quickly opened his mouth and bit my arm off. If you might think no why did Nathan do this well he did it because he wasn’t thinking there was blood everywhere around Beters hand and he screamed in agony but that isn't the unfortunate event that will happen.

 I screamed in pain and Nathan just watched me in pain with his eyes opened it looked like he regretted that decision. I then looked at him and he punched me in the face knocking me over then his hatred face began to show and big my both legs off while I screamed in pain. “This wouldn’t have happened if you didn’t kill my parents” Nathan said then I said “I didn’t murdered your parents.” As I layer their in pain I felt like I was going to pass out my body was hurting and I was lying above of my blood.

 Nathan then screamed “!You f***ing Lair” and bit of half of my body then he said “Any last words before you die of blood lost.” I opened my mouth and said ”Nooooo U” and out of nowhere I was healed up my body was back liked it was before the fight. But Nathan was losing every body part he too from me and during when this was happening he screamed out loud “What have you done to me.” Then was looking how I looked and looked at my face and said “I should have believed you when you said you didn’t kill my parents “Cough Cough” I was just stubborn and blamed you” I looked at his face in tears and said “Goodbye pal I’ll miss you” and Nathan closed his eyes and I felt no breath or heart beat from him Nathan had died and Beter began to cry like crazy.

Chapter 14 Epilogue final chapter: 3D Konongo Beter

As you may imagine or not losing a friend or loved one because of your fault I can’t tell you the emotions that Beter felt. I said that there would be a unfortunate event and this was it Beter killing his best friend but not on purpose, you may be wondering what ever happened to the people Nathan ate. Well they all returned to their houses or apartment quickly when they got eaten when they attacked Nathan well that is information we don’t have but I believe that him saying “hey sister” only has the ability of summoning James Charles fans and attack the person he choose.  After the fight Beter contacted the police and lied to them that a serial killer had murdered him but before he called he disposed of all the evidence very well that we won’t explain how but this is the evidence we have of after the fight.

 The news of a murderer were everywhere and the school held a memorial of Nathan, even though school was over Beter had guilt of what he did and decided to tell aunt Sunny. She understood and kept it a secret telling Beter she won’t tell anyone but felt like she didn’t do a good job of being a guardian for Beter, Rebecca and Beter didn’t talk much for the entire summer. Beter turned depressed on July but after 3 weeks he saw in himself that he couldn’t live on like that and after these 3 weeks he was no longer depressed and ready to put his suit back on and begin to fight and protect New York from villains but that will be in future books this story has so many more bad events and I am here to tell you that story.

  

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  • if you are reading this when you finish the book i am sorry to say that the app isnt showning the final sentence of the book but if you actually read it I think you know what the rest of the story would say.

    Jun 17, 2019

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