Category : Poems
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“I’ve got to live in pain”An often heard sad refrainStuck in the mud of despairTry to breathe some fresh airSome say just grin and bear itLook at my heart your words tear itDesperate search for solutionLeads to continued confusionTrapped with no place to goWaiting to meet the death blowTo some that’s a cause for hilarityFor victims it’s a tragic realityNo one deserves such a fateBut sadly some victims can’t waitThere are many waysTo break through the hazeBut your mind has to pause and be steadyAnd desire and your will must bereadyYou can’t do it alone so pick upyour phoneBreak the stuck stoneYour chance to ease pain now beginsThere is help and support out thereResearch can make you awareTrue it’s trial and errorBut can lesson the terrorYou’ll know with your trial youyou’ll seeThat your effort has no guaranteesBut your effort aloneCan soften that stone and lead you where your want to goWhat ‘s vividly true it’s all up to youTo start on this challenging pathOthers have done it-so instead of just sitting why not just give it a tryIt’s possible too when we next hear from youYou’ve got your new wings and you fly
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Kamal Kishore Sharma
Maurice it looks that you try to compose couplets but sudden you write three lines stanzas then switch on to quadruple lines. I know that space provided to us in mobile phones may put five or six words in a line then next word shifts automatically to next line. your ideas are good to read your feelings. You wrote there: But your effort alone can soften that stone and led you where your want to go. Here you would correct- where you want to go. Further you crossed a word there - what the impression is there you know only. perhaps you use laptop or desktop in your drafts. I prefer mobile for recording poem but I use laptop for recording or type writing a story but feel troubles in uploading a picture in the comment box. When browse a text then last line or finishing point is hidden there and I don't know that there is facility of print button or not. After all you interwoven beautiful ideas in the poem.
May 19, 2019