The Pale Horse Read Count : 71

Category : Stories

Sub Category : Drama

I had lived my whole life as a criminal.and today id die as one.

Facing a rival, he with with an Ak, I with a.40 cal.i knew from previous encounters that the Ak would prevail...still i had to try i put a round in the chamber and started to point in his direction.to late..the Ak was already spittin fire my way i could feel 1,2,3,4,5? Buletts strike thier target..me.

I felt in very slow motion how the bullets tore my flesh exiting my body and thumping elsewhere.

  • Wait a minute!this isnt happening to me!this wasnt part of the plan!This was sopose to be a quik robbery.but here i was bleeding all over my brandnew Renteria suit.
  • Laying on the concrete i knew it was over.Game over..I stared staight  to the sky(like i said couldnt move)i could smell gunpowder.i could hear sirens fast aproaching.then suddenly i had a panic attack.Id left the keys in my car for a faster getaway.what if someone tryed the door?they wouldnt be dipointed.jackass left the keys in tge ignition.i could taste blood in my mouth.It was already so hard to breath.it was the month of aug.real hot summer yet i felt as if i was laying in the north arctic.i could here key ringing from officers responding to the scene.im so tired i said to myself and closed my eyes and nodded out.
  • GET UP GEORGE!! I looked up and saw the iluminated face of a man.i had to squint my eyes his flashlight was so bright.GET UP GEORGE! I cant get up,i just got shot!Try!is this clown cop serious.i started to aim for his flash light but realized  it was empty and my empty hand felt light as a feather..and it was also bright.tben i got up with no problem i felt great like reenergized.i looked around and seen the bullet torn body of a guy that looked just like me WTF?IT WAS ME.....tobe cont

    • 2   I didn't know what do do.what to say I just slowly started lifting onto the air...without even trying.i was just staring at the young man that was lying  riddled and torn by the bullets I looked around and seen other bodies lying down close to mine about a cars length away.my homies! "Looks like you and your 'amigos walked right into  an ambush..i couldn't answer.where are my friends?'ll your friends left before you did. I was about to leave without you."'leave without me "??"where are you taking me to,?already  knowing the answer so I thought.then suddenly I had another pani attack."you won't drop me right?cus were way up here can near  space."No!I won't drop you"wht aren't you scared right now?"he asked,not really caring for an answer.so I didn't give him one.instead I asked my self t the same thing...and realized that there wasn't an answer!
    • To be con.? 

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