Demon Within Us Part 2 Read Count : 5

Category : Stories

Sub Category : Horror

Brother decided to head outside to go get something,  I didn't even know what. 

And I grew kind of scared,  I grew furious,  and got worried. 

I heard a girl laughing,  as my brother was outside. 

Then I saw a dark shadow,  down the hall. 

I felt like someone was in our home,  as if they been in our home. 

 I knew something was wrong. 

My heart began to race. 

My mind grew blanked,  and I kept growing pale. 


Just then someone came up behind me and grabbed me,  had me scream. 

It was my brother Derek,   I was so pissed. 

I slapped him,  and snarled don't dare do that,  you scared me. 

I heard a girl laughing   and I saw a shadow. 

Brother looked at me like I was loosing my mind. 

I'm not crazy I saw someone.     

He laughed,  barged up to his bedroom. 

I then heard the door open to the bathroom,  I called out,  Derek I know it's you. 

I said Derek.  He came out of his bedroom,  and he looked at me,  and said wow you're really loosing it. 

I was like if you're in the bedroom then who's in the bathroom. 

Derek looked confused,  what are you talking about?

I then pointed to the door,  the door opened itself.  And I saw a shadow,  a dark figure. 

He then went towards the bathroom door,  and he went inside and I was behind him. 

We both felt a huge gust of wind,  and the bathrooms window was wide open. 

And there was blood in the tub.  I started feeling scared,  I begin to let out a cry. 


Brother said get the phone  call the police... As I went for the phone,  the phone wire was cut. 

The wire to everything was cut,  and there was a big teddy bear that had no eye's and it had blood on it. 

I began to cry,  what is happening. 

I don't know,  he replied  

I tried to open the door to get outside but I couldn't,  the door was locked. 

It was a trap. 

We were standing there scared. 

Just then we were thrown on the couch,  and this red creature,  with red horns,  and long black nails,  and Fang's,  he was sneering angrily at us 


  • Apr 13, 2019

  • Creepy as hell. Amazing for the genre

    Apr 13, 2019

  • Ok

    Apr 13, 2019

  • Good

    Apr 13, 2019

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