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(bullies) Word's Read Count : 100

You just wait I'm get so skinny

I'm be so skinny

You'll be sorry you called me fat

God will bless me before you're eye's.

I stopped eating again

I'm get so cute and skinny

You gonna regret

Then you'll be screaming that your jealous

Your rude

God's gonna bless me in front of your face

I'm beginning to go without food

Then you and you're mommy can tag team lol

I thought you said she didn't love you

But that's okay

God's gonna bless me

David Doman

check your grammar. you might have written this piece fast, and i can get a sense of what is trying to be said. but many grammar mistakes!! just a suggestion, and trying not to be rude, but make you a better writer.

Apr 09, 2019