The Boy On Mackendale Street Read Count : 112

Category : Stories

Sub Category : Suspense/Mystery

I was walking down the street one day when not paying attention to my surroundings when out of nowhere came a boy cycling on his bike."OOF"I said in pain."Sorry are you ok". I asked the boy I just so happen to run into."Just a little scrape"he said.I looked at him while trying to help him up and I did not notice him from around here."Are you new"I asked."no I have lived here my whole life"the boy said.He stood up and cycled off. I followed him to see where he was going and it just so happened that he looks on mcindoe street where no one lives.As, I was leaving I tripped over a rock, hoping he did not hear me. I got up and ran behind a tree as he yelled "who is out there"?I stood in silence hoping he could not see me behind the tree. I turn my head only to see he was a couple inches away from me.As, she crept to buy, a voice came from the distance "Max come inside".I sighed in relief and ran towards my house. I went to my room to put Band-Aids on my scratches and after that I went to go get my dinner."What happened Alex"my mom asked. I told my mom "nothing Important".she looked at me with a concerned look on her face as I went upstairs. while in my room I looked outside my window to see the boy named Max outside on his bicycle again at 9:45 at night. I wanted to go out and see what he was doing. My mom was still downstairs. I took the risk, grabbed my coat and shoes and went outside to ask him what he was doing out there at this time of night. I asked, I was walking down the street Max looked at me and screamed "STOP".I was confused until they turned around to see a big truck approaching me. Max pushed me out of the way and asked if I was okay. I told him I was fine and then I said "how did you come so fast"? At that moment Max stormed off in anger. I was very confused and did not want Max to think that I was a rude person, so the next day I went to the store and bought a gift for Max. The gift cost me all of my allowance but, it was worth it. The next day I went to give Max his present and found out he moved. I was so upset and then the next day at school I saw him. I screamed his name was Apple x but, he ignored me. Through the entire day I tried to get his attention but, he didn't even look at me.

Comments

  • this was really good! A few veteran tips though: your text is blocky, it's just one big paragraph and can hurt peoples eye while reading. Other than that it was amazing! Keep going, I believe in you!

    Feb 20, 2019

  • If you would like a second part....please let me know.

    Feb 20, 2019

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