Adriel's Child Read Count : 59

Category : Stories

Sub Category : Adventure

Her hair was the color of bones turned to dust. 

Her eyes held the sea inside of them.

Wild designs wrapped themselves around her arms: sharp, intricate, menacing.

She spoke.

Her voice made his blood run cold.

"Who are you?"

"You already know who I am," he said.

"Do I?"

"You must."

"Must I?"

"Why else would I be here, chained to the wall, unless you know who I am and want something from me?"

A small smile. "I do know who you are. You are Roman Luca, son of Omar Luca, deceased pirate who discovered the Black Islands. Who also died by his enemy River Adriel's sword. You've spent years searching for Adriel's child, who is rumored to exist, to seek out revenge for your father. But you still have not found him or her."

All he could do was stare in shock into her haunting eyes. "Who are you?"

She smiled.


"I am Adriel's child."

Comments

  • Not bad, but your story needs more context here. You did an intersting description on Adriel's Child though.

    Mar 03, 2019

  • Gianna Olivo

    Gianna Olivo

    Thank you so much! I was thinking of continuing the story and adding more information so it makes more sense. :)

    Mar 03, 2019

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