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Windmill Read Count : 73

Wish i was a mill,

And standing here still,

Life is going to fast,

At this rate never last

Sails turning in the wind,

Thinking were I've sinned,

Tornado in the future,

Think of the torture,

All do your best for all,

Then one day u stand tall,

One thing u do to keep,

Is making sure you sleep,

We are tough and think of me,

You always hold the key,

Life is what you live,

More so what you give,

Not all of us are misguided,

We all are very one sided,

Life a windmill turning sail,

Most of us will always fail.

🤔

Feb 05, 2019
Maurice Beres

Written well but I don’t think “ most of us were fail”

Feb 05, 2019
Not bad, an interesting concept. Though, it feels your a little here and there.

Feb 05, 2019
Feb 09, 2019