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Category : Poems

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The words that were told, We’re always so cold.But then turnt into gold,Our love will still be bold. So it’s to have and to hold,Even when we’re grey and old.

I don’t really know if this is a good poem. But I’d love for feedback on what I can change.

Comments

  • shit, that pretty good. Try to start making them longer but overall good ryhming scheme

    Jan 07, 2019

  • that was good. wish i could write like that

    Jan 07, 2019

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