FEAR AND RELIEF Read Count : 40

Category : Stories

Sub Category : Adventure

Where am I? How did I get here? How long have I been here? It is dark! I am wet! It is cold! Suddenly the fear awakens within me... Did I perhaps fall into a hole? Or maybe something worse? My thoughts begin to race, perhaps I  have been kidnapped! In the distance I can hear running water... Perhaps a waterfall or a stream. The Eco's of my cry for help can be heard... Help!!! Help!! Help! Deep within I know I must calm down and figure out a way to escape. In the darkness I feel my way and find a wall, it is cold and appears to have the texture of rocks, I attempt to gather my thoughts and fear together and begin to guide myself along the rocky wall, the running water can be heard clearer now, but there is still darkness. In the distance something being dropped can be heard... Frozen like ice there I stand, the fear returns instantaneously... Are my kidnappers returning to torcher me? My thoughts begin to race as I think of all the terrible thongs my kidnappers might do to me, before they finally murder me.... The thoughts alone give me cold shivers... In the distance footsteps can be heard coming my way. My heart begins to race with panic, but all I can do now is wait, for my inevitable fate... Torch lights or rather lanterns can be seen and the footsteps are clear now... Won't be long now till my kidnappers find me. I fall to the ground, knees tucked to my chest and begin to wimper softly, as I think of my destiny... Then out of nowhere I hear a familiar voice... Is that perhaps Brandon coming to my rescue? No it can't be! My mind must be playing games with me... Then again I hear his voice! I look up with disbelief... Brandon is that really you? He helps me to my feet, dries my tears with a smile, and leads me out of the cave safely... It appears I had fallen into agap in between the rocks and into the cave, then I must have lost consciousness... There hadn't been any kidnappers after all! What a relief!!! 

Comments

  • Moshelly Lurie

    Moshelly Lurie

    this is only my second story, so please don't judge, if you would like to give advice, it would be appreciated

    Nov 29, 2018

  • Nov 29, 2018

  • Pure water. All through this writing, there is one and only asset which is going off- Honesty. Try to be Honest while writing. Experience will help you to touch the level of perfection...it's a long journey! Stay with us...together...😊💚❤

    Dec 04, 2018

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