Category : Stories

Sub Category : Suspense/Mystery

When I got on the train this dude in a hoodie started glaring at me, like he wanted to kill me or something. He didn't move or anything, just sat there and stared. I tried to calm myself and ignore him but he really creeped me out.

My train stop isn't exactly commonly used. As far as I know I'm one of the few people who'll go out that far. But once we got closer the creepy guy stayed on the train. Eventually we were the only ones left. And that was when it happened.

He got up and strode towards me, glaring at me the whole time. When he reached me he lifted his hood revealing his face, it was heavily scarred and he was missing an eye. I realized I knew him, even though he hadn't had those scars at the time.

"Hello sister." He sneered.

"Brother, what happened to you?" I gasped.

"What do you think traitor?"

"What?"

"You know what I mean."

"..."

"Fine, play dumb with me all you want. You're the reason I'm like this. And you're gonna pay."

He raised his hand palm up in a gesture kind of reminiscent of picking up a toy car or train set. As he lifted his hand I felt the train car lift off the ground, I glanced out the window and could see the ground already far below us.

"How?"

"Goodbye sister. Can't say I'm sorry to see you go."

He he slammed his hand down and suddenly the train was falling back down to the earth. Just before impact my brother shimmered and dissapeared.

And then the train slammed against the ground and everything went black.