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Category : Books-Fiction

Sub Category : Fantasy

The ice cold air suffocated me as I felt my blood freeze and my heart stop. Even the gods, using the roaring winds pushed me back from my destination. As I finnaly could clearly see the door way, the warmth of the candles and the lavanda scent which filled my nose.That's when I felt myself fall into the crystal white snow. That's when I woke up to a empty room colored in nothing but white."hello, we detected a strong presence of mana, we have suspicions that was you, we have a grimware for you, but you must help us. We know that you have no grimware so don't say this is a misunderstanding. You will help us and you will be set free of that room, do you agree?"."deos it seem like I have a choice?". "wise choice, the door will open and outside will be a grimware, but be warned, every person who has touched this grimware has died". I normally hated risks but there was no other way, I walked out and as I held out my hand I could feel the power it holed and so I touched it. I was surprised my self to see the grimware open and ask me my name."child, my name is venra, I am the grimware of the viod, as my new master, what would you like me to call you" 

    "call me jack, Jack Finley" I said in the most bluntest voice I could. Rather than being overwhelmed with power or happy I didn't die, I felt nothing." very well, from the looks of it you don't have another grimware, the way this works is when you grow stronger you will learn new spells which will be archived in me" 


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  • Oct 13, 2018

  • Oct 13, 2018

  • nice

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