Sep 14, 2018 | Rating : | Written by Tim White
When I Have You Read Count : 123

Category : Poems

Sub Category : N/A
This is how I feel I love you more then my own life 
If I did not have you I would have nothing to keep me going 
I love you so much you bring light to my world 
When i'm not by you my world is dark 
When i lay beside you it bring a smile to my face 
When i'm with you my world is so bright that I have to wear sunglasses 
I love you so much baby

Comments

  • Sep 14, 2018

  • Just a few spelling or punctuation changes "u" to "you"... "I'm" , capital "i", "nothing"... Just to touch it up a bit, but I really like it

    Sep 14, 2018

  • Aaaw.... so sweet. I love it! 💜

    Sep 14, 2018

  • Tim White

    Tim White

    thanks guys

    Sep 15, 2018

  • Sep 15, 2018

  • wow Love it

    Sep 15, 2018

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