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Aug 18, 2018 | Rating : | Written by Natalie Gerber

Control Read Count : 103

Category : Stories

Sub Category : Suspense/Mystery

I was trapped. There's not even anything to live for. It's dark. Cold, and getting colder. All of a sudden a light sparked my eye. No figure stood at the door. Only light. I asked if anyone was there. No response. How'd it open? Wind? It's cold but no wind. I didn't hear anything, only saw the light. All of a sudden, a figure stood in the frame way...

She called. There, again, was no answer, but footsteps all around her.

All of a sudden I got up in my bed. I called for my mom. She replied with get ready for school. I'm glad it was a dream.

Comments

Ofcourse we want more

Aug 18, 2018
I will!!!!

Aug 18, 2018
Natalie, I am glad your entusiastic about writing. The thing about responding to your own questions could actually have the opposite effect. A tip if you don't get alot of reads is repost it a couple of days from now by hitting edit and posting it. Give it a little time for now.

Aug 18, 2018
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