The Value Of My Life Read Count : 99

Category : Poems

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I was a boy who dreamed of getting older. So I could go out and be a soilder.I was so blind I was. How can I find the words. But I felt alive.

In battle they died. But I lived, why? Mabey it was luck mabey it was there time. But do really deserve to stay alive. And if I was younger would I do.the same if I.could see what life it brought me. Flash backs all night nightmares in broad daylight. Do I deserve it, if I knew the end of the war would I serve it 

Do I deserve to stay alive if so,why?

Comments

  • Aug 11, 2018

  • harsh vardhan

    Harsh Vardhan

    it is goood but I feel that you jave grammatical errors

    Aug 11, 2018

  • Aug 11, 2018

  • I guess I shall return the favor. but you have so many mistakes! ill fix em!

    Nov 25, 2018

  • cool

    Jun 01, 2019

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