Ramaya Assist Read Count : 108

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   It was a cold dark October night, when a teenage girl was on her way home.  There was a long dark alley in her view, a shortcut for one of the girls to get home. She waved goodbye to her friends when NAME GIRL took the alleyway. She passed a trashcan and heard a clanking sound nearby. She peeked around the corner and heart was pounding. Suddenly something jumped out from the shadows. "Mrrreoooow" A black cat leaped across the air in front of her and scurried away. She chuckled to herself and sighed with relief. Than something grabbed her from behind. All she could see was a black glove. She let out a bloodcurdling scream when the assailant drove the knife in her back, leaving her to fall in a pool of blood.

(A little graphic, but gets your attention.)

Comments

  • Thanks, anyway. I'll use a certain part of the scene for one of the characters in my story. I really appreciate your helpful feedback and advice.

    Jul 27, 2018

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