Jul 20, 2018 | Rating : | Written by Words Of Deception
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Category : Poems

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Loosing my mind creeping through time another leap of faith I must take ..trusting no one along the way ..breaking away from all my insecurities these chains that pull me apart further and further I fall into oblivion...

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  • Jul 20, 2018

  • Jul 20, 2018

  • i love it, truly. i like how insecurities is used for its descritive power. Might I suggest pain used there for flow and rhyme. I love how it is short, and you have a really great hook.

    Jul 21, 2018

  • Nov 28, 2018

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