Claws Corpse The Short Writing Read Count : 99

Category : Stories

Sub Category : Thriller

Hi I'm meKayla the cat I love hunting,pepole judge me because I

Draw edgy alot,but that doesn't hurt me,one day there was an important meeting at the rock,our leader said I was the new hunter and my mentor was tiger tail,I hunted in dark forest territory the first time,I fight a warrior in the dark forest,I meet up with scar claw,I asked him about thuderclan territory and he said in a dark voice"thunder clan back then used to hunt other clans and win the shadow clan war/fight"I was shocked by the story and I walked away as he nicely said goodbye,I finnaly became a warrior the next day,the leader said"I now declare meKayla paw to making claw!"the crowas was cheer in my location

I was filled with joy,when it was night I went to the warrior den and curled my tail on my thy and cuddled on the grass nest,and went to sleep

The next day I woke up in lighting clan,I was shocked and started screaming in tears,one of the cannibals of lighting clan come up to me and started tearing me apart,my neck started gushing blood everywhere

MY belly started bleeding,my leg was teared apart,my tears stop as I was being teared apart,I was sad as they were tearing me,I went to starclan and see what they did to cover my happiness into emptiness,and all I learned from that is that........THEY TEARED MY CLAWS AND CORPSE APART

Comments

  • Alyssa Watson

    Alyssa Watson

    not to be rude but you should put spaces after the commas, it makes it look better.

    Jul 18, 2018

  • umm destiny walker little lady you cant just say bad words in the computer btw im older than you plus you cant tell pepole your age and i think your parents are gonna see this

    Aug 18, 2018

  • Destiny Walker

    Destiny Walker

    that's grim! that part when you said "they tore my corpse! YOUR CRAZY! I'M A 7 YEAR OLD CHILD! WE CAN'T BE HAVING GORE IN BOOKS! DUMBASS BITCH! 😡

    Jul 19, 2018

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