Shadow
Read Count : 136
Category : Diary/Journal
Sub Category : N/A
You're not in my head. I forget that. I text my self more than I text anyone else. Bestowing secrets in my own ear I wouldn't tell another soul. I'm my own best friend. And so I've become. Beside the matter of how vast my image can be. Often see through. Often void of form. Many times unable to see myself. I forever bounce between manifest and goo. The melodies and rhydems, be it unlikely, are the only things that could ever find me. And actively search. I am a riddle of brick and stone. God give me an answer..please. Am I only writing this for myself? Will it be only my hand on the other side of that mirror? I'm touching. No one cares.
Comments
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i THINK i just read a poem, but i am not sure, this is why i can only rate 3 stars. I believe you are trying to express loneliness and the despair that comes with it. perhaps an attempt to tell how different you feel than what you perceive around you. there is something missing here though, something to help me buy into what you feel. its possible your stretching to express something you want to feel bit dont fully understand or something you fully understand but lack the wordcraft to express it in a way that makes me feel what inspired this. either way, keep writing i think you can get there with experience.
Jun 26, 2018
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