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Jun 26, 2018 | Rating : | Written by Bear Gal

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Hi, sorry guys, I hate to be a, a whatever you call them, but I would really like some constructive criticism on my book, it's called Mother Bear. Haha, it all comes into play later. But I could use some help, so bye!!!

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I read your work and I feel the story idea is okay, but it needs more description. It feels like when you're walking on a dry river. There's not alot of description on what's going on either.

Jun 28, 2018