DESTINY
Read Count : 128
Category : Books-Non-Fiction
Sub Category : Reference
Destiny takes one to where it has been sent to take us to. It can never be changed. Here is an example (a story of mine about destiny).
CHAPTER ONE
Fidelia lived in a village called Onyekwu. For the past one year, they've being going through lots of problems from different groups in different states, anyways they were most likely to be the group or village with least security. They had lots of natural resources, which made them had lots of problems.
On a bright morning, every one was struggling to wake, the sun was setting and almost started to shine, the cock crowed, so they had to wake up. Some rushed to the river, cause it was a turn by turn state, some rushed to the village square to display their goods, and back home to take their bath and brush their teeth.
Everyone started coming out to start the buyiny and selling like a normal market, when they heard several gun shot which sounded immediately one after the other.
(NOW ANSWER THIS: WHO WOULD BE SAVED?, WHAT WILL HAPPEN NEXT?)
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Great but the grammma and stuff is very little. Awsome and interesting can't wait to see what will happen next. Are you going to do what I am doing? Adding more to the story everyday. The commas were used a lot; the commas were used well but try to reduce them. A good way of making people think it is good is putti g your age but don't lie beacuse people might not beliece you. ALL IN ALL THE STORY IS AWSOME AND BRILLANT KEEP THE IT UP!!!!! please note it was awsome. i only criticiced you to help you get better!
May 20, 2018
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