May 31, 2018 | Rating : | Written by Markgamer 12
Deep In The Forest.....,A Wolf Pups Tale (Failed) Read Count : 117

Category : Stories

Sub Category : Childrens
                                        Ch.1 - At HomeLuke:Zzzzzzzzzz....... Nico:Wake up Son!  Luke:Ok! Let me get some fresh berrys! <7 Minutes Later> Luke:Dad I'm back! Nico:Hey son! Thanks for picking some berrys!  Jenifier:Luke did you pick these?  Luke:Yes I did Mom. Jenifier:Good boy! Now me and Dad are going to hunt,goodbye! Luke:Bye! Now what to do? I'm gonna take a nap.                                         TO BE CONTINUED

Comments

  • I understand that your writing is pretty good but one suggestion don't put colon be like said luke This will be more like a story , because right now it looks a bit rude and it seems as if you were Rushing whipe writing the story

    Aug 12, 2018

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  • 😁

    Jul 29, 2019

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