May 24, 2018 | Rating : | Written by Yarira Fonseca
Dear You, Read Count : 132

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  • I believe the true wording of the expression you used is "time of day" . I feel the last sentence in this draft is a bit weird & I don't understand it. Reminds me of a former relationship I had with a girl {who I never meant to hurt} . The memory of how the relationship ended is FOREVER haunting me & filling a lifetime with regret not JUST of how I made her feel the VERY LAST time we spoke to each other BUT ALSO of my decision {that led to accidentally breaking up with her}.

    May 24, 2018

  • Lipi Lipi

    Lipi Lipi

    yaria yours is nice but you should comment mine even mine

    May 24, 2018

  • Yarira Fonseca

    Yarira Fonseca

    this is just a taste of what I'm working on, it may be a little confusing but when it's completely done you will totally understand it.

    May 24, 2018

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