The Journey: Part 3 Read Count : 124

Category : Stories

Sub Category : Adventure
As I walked around the corner I fell to the floor. My knees suddenly went weak. Brooklyn was being hung from the ceiling by her neck. Suddenly out of the corner of the cave there was laughter.I wanted to run up to brooklyn but my legs wouldn't move. 
"COME OUT!" I yelled at the creature;it just started laughing again. "COME OUT YOU WIMP!" and the laughter stopped and the creature came out of the darkness. I thought it would be some type of ghost or something but boy was u wrong; it was my brother. My brother went missing 5 years ago; one day he never came back from school. 
"Get out of my cave or you will never see light again." He said. I stood up, but my knees were so weak with fear I fell back down again. 
"I said, GET OUT!" He repeated. "DONR THEN! YOU SHALL not LEAVE ALIVE!" He edged closer with a knife in his hand. I screamed and ran away. My legs were hurting so much. As I could see the opening of the cave I tripped over a rock. I looked behind me and he was a couple meters away. I got back up and ran again. I jumped out of the cave and climbed up the tallest tree I could find. I looked around and my brother was no where to be seen. I sighed in releaf. Then I felt two strong hands push me off the tree branch and into the river below. The river wasnt very deep and it was full of rocks. As I plummeted into the water I hit my head on one of the rocks. I passed out. Just beforeni closed my eyes I could see my brother sniggering. 

The next thing I knew I was in a hospital bed with my family around me (except my brother). My head was spinning and my vision was blurry. 
"Get down your going to get hurt!" I kept replaying in my mind. She was right. I did get hurt. But something a lot happened. I lost my best friend,  A part of me. She was my sister, not by blood, but by love. Ever since that day I have never been able to close my eyes without seeing her inoccent body daggling from the rocky ceiling. 
'When a person passes on they are still there with you, not in person, but in your heart. Iife lives on so don't just  hide under your blankets crying, get out there and live your life to the fullest.' That is what brooklyn always said when someone dies. So I listened to her advice and now I've achieved so much! I'm the head of the cheerleading team. I'm the coach of the swimming team. And I've even passed my physics exam with 100%. 

Many people have been in the cave lookig for my brother, to arrest him,  and to find brooklyn. But nobody has been found. Is my brother still in that cave? Is brooklyn still being hung from the ceiling? Will my brother ever return to civilisation? Who knows? 

            THE END!! 

Comments

  • Hey guys! This is the last part of my story 'the journey' u hope you enjoyed it!

    May 13, 2018

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  • May 13, 2018

  • This series was pretty cool. x)

    May 13, 2018

  • Ryu Chu

    Ryu Chu

    It was awesome! You should make a backstory for the brother, why did he become so heartless and left society :)

    May 13, 2018

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