A Bully Story
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Category : Books-Non-Fiction
Sub Category : Reference
There was thia kid who had a family that was port he went to school with junky clothes and everybody bullied him because of his clothes he got tired of it and said stop stop bullying me I don't like it everybody laughed and looked at him and teased him and wrote thing on his back that said kick me trip me and he told his mom and she did nothing about it and everybody stuck his head down the toilet and laughed at him they slapped his lunch tray down and he couldn't eat cause that didn't care about him he skipped school and got inrouble. He said I'm getting bullied mom this needs to stop or km finding another family and he did then he didn't get bullied is life was all better he got back at the bullies and said stop I'm not poor anymore let's see how you like getting bullied and he should him what bullying is like 6he got back at him for what he did and said see you dont like it either so stop then he did. The end
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Isabella Thomas
Well... This has some errors. First off, there is only one period. The whole story's like a big sentence. Second off, you need to fix the grammar. A story always has to have good grammar. Third off, (This is my opinion) This sounds like it was made up. It doesn't sound that realistic. I'd never encounter a kid/bully like that. And, to top it off, (My opinion, again) the whole thing doesn't even make sense. (P. S I'm not trying to criticize you, I'm just kinda correcting you, but some of it is my opinion.)
May 20, 2018
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