My First Lesbian Girlfriend
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Category : Diary/Journal
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Chapter 1: Meet me Lukas Max Droptiny Hi I'm Lukas I bet you're thinking that's and odd way to spell Lukas I thought it was with a C Lucas but No still I'm the coolest kid at Northern Way High school its fun I have a girlfriend and I'm 17. My last name Droptiny is polish my grandparents gave me the last name Droptiny in Poland when I was later that year we had to move here North America. Chapter 2: the secret revealed Monday, My girlfriend told me she had feelings for someone else who was a girl little did I know she's cheating on me with a girl like c'mon I said loudly "YOU'RE LESBIAN" she said in a whisper"yes but not so loud okay?" I said "okay" while whispering. Chapter 3: I'm gay Tuesday, I met the cutest boy we kissed he's very cute were charming together he say s were a couple now and we can hold hands, have sex, or kiss anytime he's up for it so Im pumped. Chapter 4: Powers Wendsay, Hayden aka my boyfriend can write music and make powers I have powers all of them you might not imagine when you're 4 its just to hard to come up with a power someone's already came up with. Chapter 5: Meet Hayden Devin Jessup H.D.J Hi I'm Hayden sorry I'm in your diary Lukas but I would like to introduce myself Im Hayden Devin Jessup my friends call me HD my boyfriend's Lukas and I love to play video games if you're reading this Lukas I want to say I love you and I'm the luckiest guy to have you as a boyfriend The end.....book 2 will come out soon.....
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Erica Renee
A chapter is not just a couple of sentences; that is a paragraph at best. You seem to start ideas and never finish them. Or perhaps this is merely an outline and there will be a more compete, in-depth work later. Please don't take my feedback as negative. It is meant to be constructive and to help. Whatever you do, keep writing 😊
Apr 27, 2018