My First Lesbian Girlfriend Read Count : 160

Category : Diary/Journal

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Chapter 1: Meet me Lukas Max Droptiny

Hi I'm Lukas I bet you're thinking that's and odd way to spell Lukas I thought it was with a C Lucas but No still I'm the coolest kid at Northern Way High school its fun I have a girlfriend and I'm 17. My last name Droptiny is polish my grandparents gave me the last name Droptiny in Poland when I was later that year we had to move here North America.

Chapter 2: the secret revealed 

Monday, 
My girlfriend told me she had feelings for someone else who was a girl little did I know she's cheating on me with a girl like c'mon I said loudly "YOU'RE LESBIAN" she said in a whisper"yes but not so loud okay?" I said "okay" while whispering.

Chapter 3: I'm gay

Tuesday,
I met the cutest boy we kissed he's very cute were charming together he say s were a couple now and we can hold hands, have sex, or kiss anytime he's up for it so Im pumped.

Chapter 4: Powers 

Wendsay, 
Hayden aka my boyfriend can write music and make powers I have powers all of them you might not imagine when you're 4 its just to hard to come up with a power someone's already came up with.

Chapter 5: Meet Hayden Devin Jessup H.D.J

Hi I'm Hayden sorry I'm in your diary Lukas but I would like to introduce myself Im Hayden Devin Jessup my friends call me HD my boyfriend's Lukas and I love to play video games if you're reading this Lukas I want to say I love you and I'm the luckiest guy to have you as a boyfriend 

The end.....book 2 will come out soon.....

Comments

  • Erica Renee

    Erica Renee

    A chapter is not just a couple of sentences; that is a paragraph at best. You seem to start ideas and never finish them. Or perhaps this is merely an outline and there will be a more compete,  in-depth work later. Please don't take my feedback as negative. It is meant to be constructive and to help.  Whatever you do,  keep writing 😊

    Apr 27, 2018

  • Thomas Hunter

    Thomas Hunter

    Erica is absolutely correct. that and there is spelling and grammar issues here that should be addressed. if your serious about writing and want to qrite more coherent pieces I am always available for bouncing ideas and help. that said, you still have to do the work.

    Apr 27, 2018

  • Apr 27, 2018

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