Category : Poems

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I had her on my shoulders
Till then she doesn't know what are shoulders

When doors opened
She comes running her hands opened

I get a smile
Because she gives me a smile 

The day she had her step
Too me to the highest heaven step

With a bag she bent down
Tears on my cheeks rolled down

The day she asked me for a school tour
Took me into the tensed tour

When she fought with her friend 
She made me her best friend

The day she stood out of class
Invited me into the class

Within a few years
She is 14 years

It's the studies which invited her to hostel
But I wasn't allowed to hostel

The day she ran to me
I was able to see in her eye the image of me

Time had come to face difficulties
She thought I was the solution for her difficulties 

The day came for her to have sabash
And I was waiting to give her sabash 

There she had
I was glad that she had

She had a smile 
She said it was just for me to have a smile

Closed were my eyes
Tears rolled in her eyes

Me in her dream
She helped her child to come over her dream

I was immortal
Just because she is immortal

A small discussion from me: these are not just words but practically the love towards her child the father is showing but technically he made her child upset  as he closed his eyes. Both are correct.it depends upon our mindset or mentality.
I'm 15.I would like to get some suggestions in comment box just to improve myself.☺☺