Abandoned Read Count : 136

Category : Stories

Sub Category : Suspense/Mystery

I looked into her eyes one last time, i saw a drop of water fall down her face, was she crying? or was it just the rain making my hair as wet as a sponge?i didnt know ,until i felt my back touch the solid and soaking concrete, she was abandoning me in the most dangerous place you could every think of .she walked away with HER walk the walk i adored until this very moment.


"BORING YOU CAN'T JUST USE SAD OCEAN TELL ME A DIFFERENT WORD FOR SAD"I open my eyes letting my pupils undialate as i hear a quiet chuckle from the back of the class."Alek......."I wisper angrily

Comments

  • will the story continue?

    May 06, 2018

  • Nov 29, 2018

  • i like it. it expressed a lot but so simply

    Nov 29, 2018

  • Nov 29, 2018

  • Moshelly Lurie

    Moshelly Lurie

    Great story

    Nov 29, 2018

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