The Magician: Chapter 1 Read Count : 64

Category : Books-Fiction

Sub Category : Suspense/Mystery

"Did you see that?" Robert said above the murmur of the crowd."How could i not?" Susan replied with a laugh.They were at a magic show and the magician had just performed his most famous trick, it was a simple card trick really but it always pleased the crowd. The siblings Robert and Susan were definitely enjoying themselves.It was quite unfortunate that their enjoyment didn't last much longer. Suddely there was a great flash and a lound bang somewhere on stage. The crowd was temporarily blind and deaf.Susan flung herself under her seat. "Oh-no" she thought "this isn't supposed to be part of the show"Robert's only thought was "wow, whoever is doing the special effects here really knows their stuff"When the smoke cleared and they could see again the magician was completely gone. At first they thought that it was just a disappearing act but after he didn't come back for several minutes with at least a half hour left of the show the audience began to be worried.The crowd started to talk in hused and frightened tones. A guy from the audience hopped up on stage and looked around."He's gone!" The man said "completely gone..."The rest of what he said was drowned out by a collective gasp from the crowd.The magician had been kidnapped.

Comments

  • :)

    Apr 19, 2018

  • Good job

    Apr 22, 2018

  • This litteraly made me shiver. That is good,

    May 31, 2018

  • I liked it a lot, keep up the great work. My only suggestion is make the chapters slightly longer

    Jun 03, 2018

  • its intriguing

    Sep 24, 2018

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