Yandere High School Vol2 My Crush
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Category : Books-Fiction
Sub Category : Fantasy
(This is a continued volume of volume one.) The next day I went to see Jessica and catch up "Hey Tylor is that you." Asked Jessica. "Jessica how are you? I mean we haven't seen each other in a while." I said. "Yup..." Said Jessica. "Hey Jessica who's your friend (He's hot). Oh I'm Meledy." I blushed. "Y-you know I heard that?" I said. She blushed and ran away. "Does she always does that?" I asked Jessica. "Nope." She said. "Oh by the way it's been three years by now." Karon added who I remember as Matthew. I was going to say hey Matthew but he covered his hand over my mouth. "How do you remember me?" He asked. "Not saying." I said. "Your still the same." He said. "Yeah but you've changed." I replied. "Do you still have a crush on her?" He asked. "Yep, more than ever now."
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This was difficult to read because there is grammar, spelling, and formatting errors. I am glad you are part of this community of writers so to make this constructive I will recommend writing your story in a word processor like Office for android or similar followed by a grammar editor like slickwrite.
Apr 17, 2018
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